Comments on: Learning Radio by Negative Example http://johntynan.com/archives/81 My Name is John Tynan and I am a poet. I live in Tempe, Arizona with my beautiful wife and muse. I have a hammock, a home theater, a python code book, a piano and a bicycle. Fri, 05 Sep 2008 23:33:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.1 By: John Tynan http://johntynan.com/archives/81#comment-4985 John Tynan Mon, 10 Dec 2007 19:13:17 +0000 http://johntynan.com/archives/81#comment-4985 Thanks Christy! Good to hear from you! Hope your holidays are low on stress and high on enjoying simple pleasures with the ones you love... JT Thanks Christy! Good to hear from you! Hope your holidays are low on stress and high on enjoying simple pleasures with the ones you love… JT

]]> By: christy http://johntynan.com/archives/81#comment-4984 christy Mon, 10 Dec 2007 19:01:00 +0000 http://johntynan.com/archives/81#comment-4984 OMG, John, SO much better with the changes! As a mere listener, I would say there was only one tiny, tiny segment that still felt a bit stilted, and truthfully, I don't know how you'd change it without problems with the narrative...... It was in the midst of the Lisa portion..... (lisa speaking..........) John: "But she has no regrets" (lisa speaking.......) Just seemed a bit abrupt. But really, that was all that struck me as awkward. Nice, nice job! OMG, John, SO much better with the changes!

As a mere listener, I would say there was only one tiny, tiny segment that still felt a bit stilted, and truthfully, I don’t know how you’d change it without problems with the narrative……

It was in the midst of the Lisa portion…..

(lisa speaking……….)

John: “But she has no regrets”

(lisa speaking…….)

Just seemed a bit abrupt. But really, that was all that struck me as awkward.

Nice, nice job!

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